[17 Jul 2005|04:47pm] I thought I'd start off this journal with two pieces of writing I wrote in 2003, the best thing I ever have writen to date. It was originally a dream I woke up and remembered so detailed, I had to write it down. I was getting into descriptive writing at school, and that technique showed through, and really completed this piece. I love writing that can covey so much, without words (dialouge). It's a powerful piece for me, as the memories of the exsperience/dream were so intense, the words are loaded. I'm not sure if others would find it as intense just by reading it. Just for the record, it has very mild sexual references, but in no way is it exsplicit. I think I was very tasteful in how I wrote it. But if you are easily offended by nudity, or touching/kissing please be warned it includes these things. If you're fine with it, enjoy. This was a very spiritual exsperience for me, both the dream and the process of writing it to convey the intensity I felt to others who read this. ( My Paradise. ) ( My Dream. ) I would very much like your opinions on this, and all my writing to come - but please make your comments polite, or atleast constructive. sententia?

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